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Not Quite Time.
Autumn paints in brown today,
her brighter palette gone astray.
Hints of rust now dot the trees,
as soft and random as you please.
Shades of bronze, a lighter touch:
it's early yet so not too much.
Autumn paints in brown today,
her brighter palette gone astray.
Hints of rust now dot the trees,
as soft and random as you please.
Shades of bronze, a lighter touch:
it's early yet so not too much.
Even at the hint of Autumns
Even at the hint of Autumns kiss, leaves blush their smile.
Nicely painted, your words always leave a lasting image. Thank you, it's always a pleasure.
That's a very lovely opening
That's a very lovely opening line, wish I'd thought of it :-) Thank you, I'm so pleased you enjoy my writing. Sue.
Sweet ss your pseudonym
Sweet ss your pseudonym suggests a lively breath of fresh, crisp air with a hint of hesitance the most may not have been made of summer x
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thank you, autumn is the best
Thank you, autumn is the best time of year in my eyes, so easy to find inspiration I find. It's been a half-hearted summer
here though sadly. :-) sue.
wonderful poem
lovely poem, lovely
and your photograph.. to me it reminds of a very sensitive kind intelligent soul communing with her muse.
Thank you very much, I love
Thank you very much, I love your imaginative insight of my photo too, I must admit it's one the better ones, I'm not photogenic
at all normally. sue. :-)
With a delicate and personal
With a delicate and personal touch, you invite us into Autumn's moody and subtle progression. A serenely beautiful snapshot.
Thank you very much, I'm glad
Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it x sue.
Serenity Inside
I like how you address the reader with a choice in painting the "hints of rust" image on the trees by saying they are placed "as [we] please." It adds an adaptive level of imagination whilst also invitingly maintaining the Poem's fresh, friendly tone. The whole Poem itself reads like and resembles a most serene meditation---and the source of such is specifically, indeed, your own meditation---which I highly enjoyed and appreciate.
bananas are the perfect food
for prostitues
Thank you so much, I really
Thank you so much, I really appreciate your indepth look at my poem, This one was one of those poem's that almost
wrote itself, I came up with words here and there and the rest filled themselves in. I love this time of year. :-) sue.