Paid In Full.

Dusk rides in on the heels

of dawn, charcoal etches 

dampened boughs,

November’s drapes so early

drawn, pull sullen tears

from roaming mist.

Lost the golden coins

of autumn paid in full

to winters chest.

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allets's picture

"coins of autumn"

The image rises up out of your "mist" and breathes. - slc


 

 

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Thank you Stella xx

Thank you Stella xx

Stephen's picture

Very beautiful write elegantly stated.

Stephen

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Thank you Stephen :-) 

Thank you Stephen :-)