Sunset Words.

Guilt rides lower in the sky

slowly skims horizon's line,

as sunset calls those fading words

held unforgiving, beneath the eye

to fall beside the dusk of time.

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48daniel's picture

Well done

I really liked this one. Short and powerful! The sun holds so much symbolism and I like how your poem catches that

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So sorry for late reply, I

So sorry for late reply, I didn't realise I had a comment. Thank you very much I appreciate your words a great deal. Sue :)

allets's picture

Eloquent Tears

Beautiful - A -


 

 

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Thank you :-)

Thank you :-)