The ghost of sunrise lingers still

across the fading sky,

and fading too upon my cheek

the spirit of a single tear;

that fell to your goodbye.

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Simple Sadness

in one tear - well sculptured write. Nice interplay between ghost and spirt. Singularly melancholy - Stella



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Thank you, strangely I wrote

Thank you, strangely I wrote this just a few weeks before I heard my ex husband ( still treasured friend ) had died. I'm pleased you liked it :-) Sue.