You Take It All.

You grab my heart

with both your hands

and all my breath waylay,

then call a smile upon my lips

and sing my soul away.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Another short, single verse poem. This one is for Don.  (of course) :-)

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is usually cliched in verse but this is fresh and renewed! To: "...sing my soul away..." is elevating and heart  reachingly lilting and song like. Enjoyed this short verse in a long way!



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Thank you very much, so sorry

Thank you very much, so sorry for late reply. I am so pleased you enjoyed it, he is a musician, hence the last line. Sue :-)