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You Take It All.
You grab my heart
with both your hands
and all my breath waylay,
then call a smile upon my lips
and sing my soul away.
You grab my heart
with both your hands
and all my breath waylay,
then call a smile upon my lips
and sing my soul away.
Soul
is usually cliched in verse but this is fresh and renewed! To: "...sing my soul away..." is elevating and heart reachingly lilting and song like. Enjoyed this short verse in a long way!
Thank you very much, so sorry
Thank you very much, so sorry for late reply. I am so pleased you enjoyed it, he is a musician, hence the last line. Sue :-)