Untitled Child

Just when you thought you were burning bright, you burned down into a transmuting puddle of wax its soft, smooth tendrils beginning to solidify into grotesque and lovely forms on a cluttered desk where there's a notice board to which a hodgepodge of angels and memories are pinned with melted thumbtacks

   and you're looking at old Polaroid photographs

        ribbons

               achievements

                           fingersmooth paper

   and a key that unlocks your old diary

where the pages aren't stained with blood

     but with dirt from overeager fingers

touching everything with wondered eyes

    like it was all a new experience

and in a way it was as though you could see through a transparent world except you were really just staring into the infintismal reflection of a hundredth of a thousandth of life that was yours, the other fraction hidden from your view, and in a way you're still doing the same thing: sitting in a cardboard box and thinking you know the universe.

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Italy Angel's picture

I really like this! :) You have an interesting writing style.

Guinevere Blades's picture

stephen!!oh my goodness this is so profound,i havent rad one that expressed this so perfectly in along time!you never disappoint me in poetry!always to the extreme to the limit, i damire you for that!!
~guinevere~

Pete Trevino's picture

Something in this made me cry. I am digging you man.