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Not Enough Tears
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Not So Cute (G-PG) Tears won't wash it away
They fall and fall and fall
And still the darkness stays
I'm wilting from your gaze
Your touch boils away my skin
Your love is veiled in greys
I cannot hide again
You got so mad last time
Now just tell me when
I'll be good this time
I will not turn away
Just please don't mind this mime
I'll never learn to love
But such things for you
They fit just like a glove
...don't they?
GOOD WORK
ON THIS ONE
I was checking out someone's page and found your entries all over it, so I decided to check out your writing. I stand in awe. Everything I've read is just wonderful. Not only the words but the meanings hiding behind them. Especially in this one. 'Child Abuse' is one of those commons that a lot of people write about. Your portrayal is something to remember. I had to read it twice before it all sunk in. Thank you oh so much for the detailed and honest critiques of my writing. Judging from your words you seem to be a rare breed of humanity. A good person! I look forward to reading more...
I'd love to talk to you...drop me an e-mail if you get a chance...
This is a very powerful piece...
"Evil eyes, glaring..." everywhere.
Haven't we all seen "this present darkness"?