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Agony - revised, im getting published.. THE WINNING POEM FOR THE WORLD POETRY CONTEST
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pain the repression of my thoughts
the difference i feel
i only seek to distract myself of what is real
the denial consumes
a heart full of empty rooms
ive gained but have also lost
glistening thoughts
a reflection of myself
everlasting void
a symphony of meloncholy
all held in my hand
as i only seek of what i am lacking
left my soul sent blacking
ever since that day
how can i ever feel this way
nothing appears as it use to
nobody has a clue
my mind numb
all the questions rush through
but now i know its because of you
how different you are
so distant and far
the way it was before
loving me so evermore
so perfect and unreal
now i can barely even feel
the amazing sensation
where is my salvation
now is empty
a black whole of agony
all is drained away
as though it is lost.. not willing to come back to stay
i dont feel as before
leaving my heart like a cold shore
nor do i think, but who is to blame
but all i know is that nothing is the same.
I love the way you right, it
I love the way you right, it definitely evoked a lot of emotion.
Great poem
Thank you!
thank you i appreciate this comment greatly!! i try to put as much emotion as i can!
forever and always <3 Jenn
Wonderful poem!
Wonderful poem! Congratulations!!! Cheers SS! :D!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Double Congrats!
I marvel at titles, always have. But as you are a winner already, congrats would have to be squared so (congratulations to the second power) - This is fun, neh? - Lady A