Footnote: After The Autumn Equinox

The air is chilly;

like our home, like the silence

always between us.


Kyakuchuu

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Brings a thought: could the

Brings a thought: could the cold stone marble slab in its silence and only the desolate breeze be an exact quietude after a fireworks display of an earthly roadtrip into the hereafter? The engraved letters in the cold light of a silent moon mute the sound of their meaning still.... that after the autumn equinox the cold of winter's reticence, her chilly fingers pass and caress.


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Thank you for that comment,

Thank you for that comment, and I think this comment is a nascent poem that deserves to be developed.


J-Called

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It did feel like a conception

It did feel like a conception began and it will gestate in its own unique timing. Thanks for confirming this in your very kind response.


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