+ 27.225 MHz: Peace Of Mind Like Waterfall From A Small, Rural Creek

[for patriciajj, Il Miglior Fabbro]

 

A creek's water spills
over an edge, onto rocks
below. The water
shatters to drops, but gathers---
whole again---in tranquil pools.

 

Kyakuchuu

 

aka

 

Starward

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patriciajj's picture

There is a universe of

There is a universe of meaning and hope in this compact masterpiece. The water reminds us of Oneness, our ultimate state of wholeness, even if at times circumstances appear "shattered". Profound and brilliant work. I'm deeply honored by the dedication. Many thanks. 

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Thank you for the comment. 

Thank you for the comment.  The poem would never have come to me without the precedent of your poems! 


Starward