Author Information
Sunset Victory
A hot summer breeze
Caressing my velvet skin
As I lay mesmerized
Addicted to the sunlight.
The warm sand teases my body
My mood ameliorated
Only to vanish with in moments
Falling flat of triumph.
They laugh and smile together
Sailing through the sand
Playfully shoving one another
The smell of love suffocates me.
I am walking a similar path
Jagged Rocks, holes and steep cliffs
Have passed and are more to come
I see the rocky road a head.
My mind set to muse:
What will come of our misfortunes?
Of our unfortunate search and rescues
Rebuilding bricks of trust that fell.
Momentarily drowning in a sea of doubt
Reborn on a beach of hope and truth
Embedded on my heart like stars in the night
A sunset of reds and pinks foreshadow victory.
hey robin! this poem is really good. I already know that I told u that I liked it but I'm gonna post it up here. yeh, the poem is really good. It has alot of imagary. When I read it I can picture the images in my head. Good work girl. Keep it up! :)
love a friend,
Sherry