Don't write me fucking poetry

 

 

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The love that helps a knight

traverse a mountain

*

Yeah,

well you don't have the words for that

*

the passion that curls toes

just doesn't sound the same when you describe it

*

'nice'

is not a romantic word

niether is

'I wanna fuck you'

*

but the way you 'do it'

*

   Yeah...

 

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;) love it! 

;) love it! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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Ha ha what a rush just the

Ha ha what a rush just the comments alone! The poem is a personal fave too x hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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what if i want to fucking

what if i want to fucking write you poetry about important things like shitting and farting. what the fuck then

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Well my favourite dumbass of

Well my favourite dumbass of the minute it clearly does not say do t write me fucking farting or shitting poetry. Only fucking poetry ;P 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

pldappls's picture

"i do what i want to do i

"i do what i want to do i don't care if i get caught

the DA can play this mothafuckin tape in court"

pldappls's picture

you can pry my fucking

you can pry my fucking farting and my fucking shitting from my COLD DEAD HANDS BARACK "HUSSEIN"

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Oooooh that's a nugget! Love

Oooooh that's a nugget! Love the in your face attitude! That wasn't fucking poetry either  ;) hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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i am a real doctor

i am a real doctor

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I am a real person guess you

I am a real person guess you got me beat? :/


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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Nursing 101? ;-)

Nursing 101? ;-)


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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Lol! 

Lol! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

cevance's picture

Very enjoyable, but I don't

Very enjoyable, but I don't think I'm allowed to read naughty words, so I put my blinders on.  Cool

 

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Lol! Can you make it sound

Lol! Can you make it sound romatic oh romantic one? I think you of all could fashion something rather memorable and exquisite care to give Roc a run for his honey? ;) 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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Challenge Accepted!

"Always on My Mind"


I probably shouldn't say this
It just might be the wrong time
But how can I delay it
When it's always on my mind
Sometimes in the darkness
When I'm feeling all alone
And the thought of all your softness
Breeds a touch deep to the bone
I set my mind to wandering
To our bodies in the throes
Skin meets skin with tenderness
And heartbeats race in tone
The images I'm conjuring
Of fire in our souls
Romance, passion, soft caress
Hand in hand, toe to toe
No, I won't just write a poem
To describe how I'd love to spend my nights
I'd much rather show it
While you're lying by my side
And you may never know this
But it's always on my mind


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

running_with_rabbits's picture

<3

now you just need to work the line 'I wanna fuck you' into the poem and we have this sorted!


Much Love

Ashley

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Love this but kinda

Love this but kinda disappointed you didnt  use I wanna fuck you. I thought for sure you could do it and make it romantic, but touch of ink did. ;P rise to the challenge once more sir RoC! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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Understood.

I thought you wanted it inferred poeticallike. My mistake. So, here's an amendment.


I really want to fuck you
But it does sound rather crude
Don't want to say "I want to fuck you"
Though it's what I'd love to do
I don't just want to fuck you
There's just so much more to you
But when we're talking and you see me glancing down
Just know that I am listening, but my mind's dancing around
To the conversation ending and the bed being turned down
Because I'm starting to get hungry, and I feel like eating out
So, now, you know I want to fuck you, maybe it's time for bed
There'll be ample time for talking and we'll do this dance again
I think about it all the time
Yes, it's always on my mind


...satisfied? Or is a round three in order? ;)


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

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That's a cute one. Now lets

That's a cute one. Now lets take it step three,

 Take your fucking panties, mister,

Pull them to your knees,

I'm really very horny, and I'd love to fuck you,

Please?

The children are now sleeping,

And the dishes are all done,

The laundry's in the dryer, 

Now it's mama's turn  for fun!!

Please ignore the urgency,

This lust I cannot hide,

Put your stirrups on because you're going for a ride!!

Every inch of you is getting 

Just what you deserve,

And I'm going in that back door too...

(Oh my...I have the NERVE!!)

 

Lmao...oh my god! Did I do THAT????? 

Lmao

 


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

running_with_rabbits's picture

wow...

I don't know how to feel right now night...I...I...back door? :/ lol


Much Love

Ashley

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Ah big PSML TO THAT GUTSY

Ah big PSML TO THAT GUTSY MOVE NIGHTLIGHT!!!!, who hoo rides cowboy shake that ass!!! Bahahahahahahahahahahahahaha fucking loooooove it lol lol lol lol lol lol


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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Good, Ssmoothest, I'm always

Good, Ssmoothest, I'm always glad to see you chuckle. :-) ♥


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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Haha! Well done roc I bow to

Haha! Well done roc I bow to your prowess! Hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

nightlight1220's picture

That is beautiful. And what I

That is beautiful. And what I want to know, is who, how, where , when, why...TAUGHT that to you, because see, that is what wwomen want to hear from the man they love... but most often, we get stuck having to understand through other things at are, I confess, just as sweet....but not near as romantic. Not that romance cannot happen without flowery expression of emotion, but it's a rather beautiful way to express it, I think, and especialy so when spoken face to face under candlelite or while in the act...as touchofink presents in her poem. We women like hot lovemaking as much as as men do, but it is all about how you do it and the time taken. A sloppy lay is like he differnce between eating a cold english muffin with butter that just sits on top of it, or eating a warmed one where the butter oozes into all the little nooks and crannies, juicy, hot, tasty, and getting the fingers all messy and and loving every minute. :-)))


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

running_with_rabbits's picture

indeed!

that is the perfect similie for a bad lay! HUGS I may fb status that!


Much Love

Ashley

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Go for it! Yes it is the

Go for it! Yes it is the truth!! 

...


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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Messy fingers...

Always the start of something hot, and usually tasty :p
Self-taught, for the most part, mixed with a sincere amount of empathy.
The real trick, is successfully doing both, hot and wild blended with soft and romantic, and then separating and combining in the most random sequence to always be unexpected, and hopefully enjoyed.


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

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That sounds fucking hoT!

That sounds fucking hoT! Heavenly! Roc hard! ;) 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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Haha! Sorry guys been so

Haha! Sorry guys been so busy! Another two weeks and then I'm back baby? 

Rwr lol, if anynor can write a romantic 'i wanna fuck you' poem you'd be easily at the top of the most capable list! Infact I can't wait to see what you do with it!  I'm already wondering about the title! Lol

 

Bishy love your comments. I love think about life and people watch too! Much of what you say is so true! 

 

Lala isure sure did tell em girl! Lol thanks babe! :) 

 

 

Dovely, ly, you're always lovely! Love how you get me and this was inspired by the most wonderful person in the world aside from you of course! 

 

Night light gh time sorry I'm telling the world these dumasses have had it too easy too long the world needs romance! Lol! ;) 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

running_with_rabbits's picture

:)

man I use to always hate when gusy tried writing me poetry...even when it was good...simpl because they didn't write before me and they only did it cause I liked poetry...it felt hallow...like they only wrote it to impress me...that they even felt they needed to impress me in the first place....the only way to impress me is to just be you and hopeflly you is someone I fidn impressive :P

 

I wanna try and wrtie 'I wanna fuck you' in a poem in such a way it comes off romantic now....not to spite you or anything...more to see if it is possible in the first place lol


Much Love

Ashley

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You can do it! 

You can do it! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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On Love

                                     On Love

                         ======

So many writers say so many things about Love

They paint luscious lips,longing eyes,bulby bosoms

Some paint the ivory pink smoothness of butter-skin

Soft and melty like ice-cream on parched warm lips

Lies ooze out from the passionate lovers who entwine

While they spend the savoury minutes of ecstasy

She thinks of her dream He-Man ,he of the Fairy

She  gets entangled in him so do their passion

Maybe love is a smile and a rose on V-Day February

A kiss expected but both are equally wary

So the one-night stand love came to grow

No hopes of future simply passion & lust most raw

This is not the lady's view ..his? naw ! naw! naw!


©bishu 

 

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Ha ha wonderful bishy!  Just

Ha ha wonderful bishy!  Just saw this!  Hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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ROFLMAO.. Shhhhhh!!!! You

ROFLMAO.. Shhhhhh!!!! You aren't supposed to let them know it's a turn off!! That way, we can be amused at them making total asses of themselves!! 


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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ha ha yeah i see what

you mean! bahahahahahaha!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am