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The stars won't sing
Fighting our sstars
fighting who we are
loves notion turned wrong
because others wrote our songs
now were stuck in this sad melody
turning hands to our faces because
our love concerto was overwritten
and creation was too polite to say
so you and I wait for thier song to end
so that we can write the new score
for our reconciled stars
in the truth of who we are
I really enjoyed the premise
I really enjoyed the premise of these lines and the line of thought it brought me to. Well done.
"our love concerto was overwritten
and creation was too polite to say"
Thanks inkstain. Hugss
Thanks inkstain. Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
The stars, my dear
Will always sing for you
Whenever you feel blue
They'll sing for you
When you've got stars in your eyes
When you've got too much on your mind
When nothing goes just right
When you sing your songs on high
In everything you ever do
The stars will always sing for you
"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr
Beautiful! You made my day!
Beautiful! You made my day! :)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
I do my best
To keep you smiling :)
"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr
Haha! Imitation is flattery,
Haha! Imitation is flattery, yes.. but it's also plagiarism! LOL. Oh, I shouldn't laugh because this is serious subject, but it was my thought once when someone said to me, "imitation is flattery"---and for some reason at the time I felt that they were being facetious about something.
Nice write with wisdom in it. Love all your stuff, SSmoothie.
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
I understand nightlight. Hard
I understand nightlight. Hard to be generous with our ideas, but its the risk we take, besides I write mine for sharing and clearing out my emotions and being creative and experimenting freely. It's good to get feedback and It's always a pleasure to inspire. :)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
It's all good as far as I can
It's all good as far as I can see, SSmoothis. Whether it be poetry, or real life situations---everything happens not our time but in the universe's time. That is what is difficult for me, not the sharing, but I must say, the reminders along the way help me more than they hurt---because they keep me focused on living to the pulse of the Earth, and "in" love. ~peace~
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
Oh, ssmoothie, I really felt
Oh, ssmoothie, I really felt this one. Nice piece.
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Thank dear hugss
Thank dear hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."