Crying game.

Tore his heart out and threw it on the floor,
So he tells me,
He aches for me
and wants to scratch it out of his chest cavity
So he tells me.
He calls for me
A regret that shakes the moon
A love that won't die
So he tells me
He comes for me
Tore his pride right out of his chest
A gaping wound that won't heal
So he tells me
But I don't feel a thing
Because the mirror has two faces
And I wouldn't look at his
When it was done to me.

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Daylitmoon's picture

Great write! Personal and

Great write!

Personal and relatable all in one, a sign of a good bard.

SSmoothie's picture

Why thank you because I love

Why thank you because I love your poetry! And am glad you have burst onto the scene! I'm way more casual about my writing, so they are rough gems, but the way you write, man that is something! Haven't had much time to comment but worthy poems deserve worthy comments, when I get over my gobsmacked awe ill probably respond to more! Cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

Daylitmoon's picture

Flattery will you get you everywhere, my dear.

Why thank you, I write what I know and what I live.

Everyone's story is precious and beautiful, rough gems are still gems after all.

SSmoothie's picture

Agreed! :D

Agreed! :D


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

allets's picture

Rough Gem High Value

Enjoyed reading this poem. Engaging and skillfully wrought...re-reading was a must...Lady A


 

 

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Thanks lady A! You re another

Thanks lady A! You re another exceptional poet! HugSS SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am