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Say it again.
it feels so good,
and yet, so hollow;
speak my name with it!
Look into my eyes and say it!
hold me in your arms and say it!
kiss me tenderly and say it.
make it sound like its real.
convince me, lie to me.
tell me you still feel;
hold me, love me,
as if it's for real.
say it again.

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lies are remnants of truth.

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last updated 13 July 2012 - 5:16pm
©13 July 2012 - 12:19pm — SSmoothie
14 July 2012 - 11:52am — Beavis
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Wow!

I just had a flashback! Great Poem!

14 July 2012 - 1:15pm — SSmoothie
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well now,

wouldn't I like to be a fly on the wall of your mind? ;P thankyou, I hope the flash back wasnt too bad! hugss

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

14 July 2012 - 7:20am — xMattx
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I

can relate. People are stupid. Nice poem.

14 July 2012 - 8:41am — SSmoothie
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hey! you get me!

I love that! ;D cheers SS

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."