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When the going gets tough

Where did you go?
Without a word slunk away.
Like falling on cactus
You knew it would hurt
And it wasn't enough to trust.
Precious words gone forever
Another one bites the dust
How cruel a thing to think
One can never maintain a trust
This world is stupid
and I've had enough
Too many reasons to quit
And the few that matter don't
I will be fine I hope you will too
I will always remember to pray for you
God bless you and be more than ok
I'll miss your lovely rhymes
And your beautiful lines
I hope you kept it all and
Remember what I said
Love you Hugs ss.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

When you don't understand how or why because the idea is alien to you, you just got to hope and pray and be ok. Acceptance is hard that's how you know its a good thing.

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last updated 24 April 2012 - 10:03pm
©24 April 2012 - 10:01pm — SSmoothie
27 April 2012 - 2:26pm — thisisme789
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Wow, that's real deep! And a

Wow, that's real deep! And a great poem!

<3

25 April 2012 - 1:11am — Daniel-59
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Acceptance is probably the

Acceptance is probably the hardest thing for Me to Accept..lol..kinda like turning the other cheek something I deferentially have not got down yet !........Good Scribbling anyway ~ DD ~

Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces

25 April 2012 - 10:00am — SSmoothie
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join the club lol!

Loving your work Daniel you too ash heck so much great poetry wish I had more download allowance for my phone :( HugSS all!

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."