Slippage and time

Another minute wasted, but savored 

lets never leave from this place 

it seems an eternity we Labored

To be here in this same space

together after chasing stars and comet tails 

running rings around Saturns moons 

under and through where the dark holes hail 

over and under shifting desert dunes 

Looking for me, looking for you 

another minute wasted but savored 

Now we dance Dance along ultra violet tunes 

but us, dastardly luck never favored 

to the beat of our hearts croon 

looking for me, looking for you 

the fabric of the universe once again tears 

Nothing left but to rue 

it seems it never cares

for me or for you 

but hold tight love make this minute last 

there’s nothing we can do 

time seeps by so fast 

loving me loving you 

well find eachother again agape 

it’s what we were designed to do 

I ache another minute through 

kiss met love hold on 

I promise I’ll find you

promise you’ll find me 

lets take this one last breath 

together in the same air 

and as you’re torn away from me 

know eventually I’ll be there 

and now as you fade into another oblivion 

I’m grateful for those minutes

wasted yet deeply savored 

to sustain us 

till we meet again. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Your Poems

 Are the longest sentences in the world. I looked to find one period, your style places it at the end. Supply your own pauses poetry. "Dance along ultra violet tunes" bye the bye, is exquisitely well honed verse. I enjoy where you go with images like: "...under and through where the dark holes hail..." They just kinda rock is all. ttyl - slc hugz


 

 

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And who am I to interfear

And who am I to interfear with the way you would like to read my poems? Yes choose your own pauses them read again, choose different ones and read again why not it's yours to infer once I'm done. ;) 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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Fitzy!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D 

Fitzy!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am