Twist in the sparkle of the eye

light drifting down in soft peach amber hues on rested clouds 

weary form the days playful Rollings and tumbles 

the heavens were a laugh for hours and peace began to settle in

but the night drew itself over dark clouds rumbling and hurtling tumultuously

a mass of cracks and and flashes of anger

stopped in an instant by the radiant smile and slivers of beaming joy 

Breathtakingingly the light and clouds melded in a trance and slowly swirled together in a mass of colour and drama as all sunsets worthy of lovers watching with gleams in their eyes and sparkls in their hearts should  

 

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

you know sometimes you just wish the Gods would grow up and just deal with their shit on their own and stop dragging nature into it just because they can 

I guess we all can. 

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Glad it made you smile :)

Glad it made you smile :) made my fay to hear it did Allets. Thankyou hugss 


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maybe that beautiful array of

maybe that beautiful array of colors in the clouds was placed there just for your enjoyment


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Yes of course or maybe we can

Yes of course or maybe we can compromise and sometimes make something spectacular out of nothing ;) 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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As Is

Insert here everything ever written about global warming and its affects. That aside, we will impose our views on nature ad nauseum. It's what we do. Good nature poem - especially soothing: "...weary  from the days playful Rollings and tumbles..." A well painted image. Made me smile - slc


 

 

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I'm glad. I need some

I'm glad. I need some soulraising hope. Some times you just gotta make it yourself :) hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."