Next to this

 

silence was a welcome relief 

and the darkness seemed like a cosy blanket 

stirrings of after thoughts 

guilt ridden excuses had plaglued the mind 

it has been disowned for a time

knowing only trouble and fast lips 

and quicker hands 

hot cheeks and tepid tears 

feel better away from the light 

scratching doohickey things on the wall for a while in the dark

seemed like the perfectly perfunctory thing to do

so it was done.

 

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Cascade's picture

So...to this I'm just gonna

So...to this I'm just gonna say, "and I like how you do it"!  Awesome doohickey (ing) "Scratch the wall" any time, S M O O T H I E!

SSmoothie's picture

Awww thanks cascade :)

I'm a silly poet and worse philosopher but you are such a wonderful writer and encourager! this is a numb poem. The I just wanna hide away in the dark and try not to think about it while I'm thinking about it doohickeys on the wall have taken my finger prints over time. ;) 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

allets's picture

Great Ending!

"...hot cheeks and tepid tears..." You have this way with imagery that blows me away! - slc


 

 

SSmoothie's picture

I guess that's just how I

I guess that's just how I think of them I just focus in on the description and the best essence of it no matter how it sounds. Thanks for your encouragement blessings and hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am