Haiku missing

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the missing

Leaves float from the trees 

As my thoughts travel to you 

but stars are too far

 

empty caves echo

darkness in your absence 

now wrongly accused

 

Gaping holes swallow 

Unfed by the need of you 

infantile longings

 

the air escapes me

panic! I find you missing 

no rock left unturned 

 

where does the wind go? 

Perhaps the same place you do?

Both starkly missing 

 

unfilled air lacks words 

heart songs still go un rendered 

my heart is missing 

 

these haiku are shit!

cant even write one for you 

i miss you so bad! 

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I Would Bet

$100.00 that no one has every written the words "these haiku are shit" in haiku before. Some senses of humor are weird like mine - I laughed a bit at "my heart is missing" a double entendre: the meanings flutter one to other and back again. - cool write, extraordinary theme. - allets -

 


 

 

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At least you get me, that's

At least you get me, that's all I need in this world another sane mind off the cuff and non judgement but very discerning :)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

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