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Kisses sent to the moon and beyond

blown with a breath on a heartbeat

Why do the stars drift so far?

why do you hide amongst them so well?

To you wherever you are sitting atop my lucky star

the one with the Halo burning bright

can you feel my love tonight?

Do you hear my deepest wish

jump a little star or two closer,

If only just a while, to close the distance between you and my aching heart

to capure some small pulse of your resonance

So that I might respire,

from the absence of your burning touch and heavenly fires

That set alight the ache, of long held desires

a kiss on the breath of a heart beat,

hunts the space of time

for a flicker in the hopes

in some small way,

I still matter... 

 

Kisses to the moon and beyond

blown with a breath on a heartbeat 

Why do the stars drift so far?

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"...hunts the space of time..."

I adore a great time image - always on the look out for a great one. Found it here. - allets -

 


 

 

mrpoofs's picture

This is amazing. taht is all

This is amazing. taht is all

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Amazing? Awwwww thanks :D

Amazing? Awwwww thanks :D made my year! 

 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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To the moon and beyond

More like kisses sent into the night
To gather stardust from the sky
And light the soul in the sweetest fires
To burn in tandem, touch inspired
A frequency so viscerally carnal
Felt deep to bone through every pore
Resonating in tune eternal
Tasted sweetly forevermore


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

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Oh mGod! You just wrote MY

Oh mGod! You just wrote MY perfect poem all my favorite words and ideas in one small space of eternity claimed forever! Please post. This in my eyes is the greatest short poem I have read in years! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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17 December 2016 - 11:38pm





Lucky Star 
 
 
 
 
allets's picture

Lucky Star

I keep it in the pocket of my heart, take it out, examine its contours, its colors, then put it back for the next time I need a reminder that luck is a thing of the heart. - allets -


 

Lady A

 

 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

Astral_Tides's picture

Oh...

Delectable wavelengths you create with that shine.

There is a soft yearning, and an adorable nature here that gently lures the reader in, and embraces them.

As if a voice says " Come, hold this"

I would like to see some refinement topunctuation and structure.

There are holes, but you are on to something extraordinary I think.

Had to say.

 


"The stars awaken a certain reverence, because though always present, they are inaccessible; but all natural objects make a kindred impression, when the mind is open to their influence." R.W.E.

 


 

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Great to hear from u my phone

Great to hear from u my phone is all I hsve abd it dont do much out here in the obscurity of where I am. how about you do your thing and go to town on it and we'll post as a colab. I write lines and ideas here for my books they dont always exist  as poems but as poetic ideas to catch and develop later. Bang on with the mood and intention of the piece :) can't wait to see what you do with it! :) hugss Of Joy Ss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

Astral_Tides's picture

Really? I was thinking to

Really?

I was thinking to myself " Damn, if I only had the audacity to intervene..." after a few passes through this creation of yours.

How did you get in here? >: |

 

 

 


"The stars awaken a certain reverence, because though always present, they are inaccessible; but all natural objects make a kindred impression, when the mind is open to their influence." R.W.E.

 


 

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:D get to work I cant wait

:D get to work I cant wait gtg will checkin again when in range ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

Astral_Tides's picture

I am inspired. I will dip my

I am inspired.

I will dip my palms in the solar winds.

Inspiration has been a dull struggle as of late.

Thank you for this offering.

The particles are ticking.

 

 


"The stars awaken a certain reverence, because though always present, they are inaccessible; but all natural objects make a kindred impression, when the mind is open to their influence." R.W.E.