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Nerves suspended on pins.

Pricks sizzling and crackling up my spine 

Along my neck and dancing across shoulders,

Soft peaks strain against cruel frabric hardening to attention 

Warm sweet bulbs of delight light up with aching

The lazy drip of warmth slips out laying a bed of welcome

Thighs eco inviting sentiments laxed open 

Hips slide up senously,

the request resoundingly clear

Passion's fever lit,

Fed and readied by the slow burn,


And you havent even touched me yet.

 

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bishu's picture

Oh yes Rspctd SS

Some biology cannot be ignored. Putting in a poetic manner is difficult. Makes sense.


©bishu 

 

Daniel-59's picture

Someone Is A Damn Idiot , Is

Someone Is A Damn Idiot , Is all I have to say My Twisted Sitter ! LOL


Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces

SSmoothie's picture

Tell me about it! Lmao!

Tell me about it! Lmao!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Sassylass's picture

Ermmm

Uh, leaves me warm and cozy.

i pushed your follow button...lmao

but that was before I read this.?..

nice job!

i hope you got the delight you are after.

~Koko~

 

PS

im reading it again :D


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words

 

SSmoothie's picture

Ha ha ha lrlets just say

Ha ha ha lrlets just say after reading it we were both very satisfied with the results. ;D HugSS 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

allets's picture

A Wonderful

surprise ending. As always.


 

 

SSmoothie's picture

Love it that you notice

Love it that you notice exactly the bits i love about every poem, anyone's poem. That is incredibly awesome to me :) blessings n hugSS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."