What do you write when everything's roses?

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Sunlight on petals forming rainbows through dew drops? 

Blushing pink lips and vanilla dreams? 

The crevices and valleys of sensuous skin?

The fluttering anxious anxiety lifting your soul?

Or just the boring shit of it all 

Looking for a crack to split open

so you can walk away and fuck it all 

Maybe then we'll have something gutral to write...

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Did you really think I wouldn't wreck it?

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Daniel-59's picture

hearts grow cold and roses

hearts grow cold and roses die


Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces

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Hearts are crazy big little

Hearts are crazy big little fuckers arent they? Roses at least have a rime to bloom and luckily the die the same silk rose can get quite boring  twisted brother sie. ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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I Live These Images

They ruin nothing and enhance clarity xoxoxo with one big hug - allets -

 


 

 

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Heh drama or over dramatising

Heh drama or over dramatising is a poet's bestest bud and biggest bain. Over thinking the feel of it in the descriptive narrative.


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am