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Bang, bang...
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tragedy Irksome calm
Uncomfortable silence
Tension before the violence
Unsettling mind
Uneasy heart
Oceans apart
Denial of trust
Darkness and shadows
Lies like truths
Piercing arrows
Stabs of aching
The sound of breaking
If only you had said
What's in your head
I wouldn't have filled in my own blanks
With lead.
Damn. This is intense and
Damn. This is intense and awesome. A lil murder in the morn?
And it rhymes! Who hoo!
And it rhymes! Who hoo! Killed it! Even if I do say so myself ;)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
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Nicely !woven lines. The ending rocks! You nailed a format that is hard to sustain by lesser penmanship. Bravo to your smoking guns. (pardon, been watching Deadwood - Calamity Jane sysndrome owns me) ~ xoxoxo Stella
Why thats alright lil' lady,
Why thats alright lil' lady, im glad you enjoyed the quick draw. Thank you very much for your kind words! ;) spaghetti westerns and classic westerns totally rock! Hugss!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."