Bang, bang...

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tragedy

Irksome calm

Uncomfortable silence

Tension before the violence

Unsettling mind

Uneasy heart 

 Oceans apart 

Denial of trust

Darkness and shadows 

Lies like truths

Piercing arrows 

Stabs of aching 

The sound of breaking 

If only you had said

What's in your head 

I wouldn't have filled in my own blanks 

With lead.

 

 

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Damn. This is intense and

Damn. This is intense and awesome. A lil murder in the morn?

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And it rhymes!  Who hoo!

And it rhymes!  Who hoo! Killed it! Even if I do say so myself ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

allets's picture

Turn of Phrase

Nicely !woven lines. The ending rocks! You nailed a format that is hard to sustain by lesser penmanship. Bravo to your smoking guns. (pardon, been watching Deadwood - Calamity Jane sysndrome owns me) ~ xoxoxo Stella


 

 

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Why thats alright lil' lady,

Why thats alright lil' lady, im glad you enjoyed the quick draw. Thank you very much for your kind words!  ;) spaghetti westerns and classic westerns totally rock! Hugss! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am