Well, its not easy

 Reality check!

Fuck me!

Do you think its easy?

to shatter your illusions,

And wring you from your happy delusions,

All for your own fucking good?

 

You think I like to see you fall off your spine

into a puddle of mess? 

It takes a whole lotta love

to summon up the courage

To tear you apart 

And put you back together

to show you

that you deserve better. 

Everytime I hang your flesh back on to your bones rearranged, taller, better and stronger than before;

I take that breath, 

I pray that prayer

I risk it all for you. 

Youd better realize

im the only one willing

to lose you

to help you find you. 

So you wont be one of them.

 

Now hold on,

this is gonna hurt quite a bit.

 

 

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mrpoofs's picture

Its always hard to see

Its always hard to see someone self destructive...I hope you save them.

allets's picture

Fantastic Write

The Bone Surgeon rocks! I smiled a lot reading this. Thanks for the share - a fab and sassy piece of art worked. :D & :D ~a~

ps: this poem has so many meanings on multiple levels. All I can say is "OUCH!"
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Yeah, wild thing you make my

Yeah, wild thing you make my heart sing! You get me open poems mean one thing to me another to another then the truly wise can see it all, every flicker of thought every layer of emotion the multiverse of verse any idea or level you want my mind works faster and more eloquent ly than my fingertips.  But I always deeply appreciate how you see through it. Bless you! What a gift!  This one though so tempting to read as selfthought is a dialog about shattering family connection and making someone see the painful nature of it where some would think it vindictive or cruel but yes thats just one vein of thought running through the spew in my mind and heart :) now my soul, well...  theres another doozy! Hugss deep poet guru. I always sing in my pride center when you express your connection s to what I write. Xo 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."