Facing W

She watched the brightest star

Slide slowly across the sky

As if a chess piece 

Being moved

To the other side

Of the board

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allets's picture

Nice Chess Image

Great shooting star analogy - slc Like!


 

 

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It was

So much like watching a chess piece... It remains a profound moment etched in my spirit's eyes.


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Stephen's picture

Nicely crafted poem.

Wonderful imagery.  Stephen

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Thank you :)

certainly left a deposit in me memory bank


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