PostPoems Be Artistic. Be Creative. Be Inspired!

David,

          Think of pain as a tool. Of these five poems of yours I just read. Every one of those experiences I would say are teachable moments for you. Love can not be earned or paid it just is there and if it is not then one must walk away otherwise you go through what you went through in those 5 poems shared. My mother says you can't draw blood out of a turnip. I say toss out that turnip and look for a nice girl with warmth in her  heart for you. Why love an empty vessel that misses the mark when it comes to loving you back? Keep writing too its a salve for the aching soul. I've written through unrequited love and all its heartaches too, far many more times than I wish to recount. again.Steer clear in future of emotionally unavailable women who only want you physically that can only hurt you again and again. Being wanted is never enough. Find a woman who will love you for you and then the wanting you physically will come as a natural by product of that deep love. I wish you all the best my poetic friend. Keep writing and keep evolving, as the alternative to that i never good.sincerely Melissa Lundeen.