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As It Had Been
Empty vessel crier,
power in repletion:
hasten in the mire,
rally through your lesions.
Fractured upon entry
by braving spacial voids
drowning in old debris
and straying asteroids;
its cone did pierce and fall
through the weakened entry,
spiraling and indrawn -
empty as it had been.
far out man
watch apollo 13 recently. im not crazy about the mire but im a fan of yours
Empty As It Had Been
powerful write with empty as it had been sums up each word's relationships, placed with exactitude where it belongs and should live, at the end. Topical, cyberastronomical (astral tides will like this one), and just plan neat ~~A~~