Soul

 

 

 




And the lover was damned

to their love. 

nightlight1220's picture

I think the perspective is

I think the perspective is one that judges how another sees the world...

 

 

Is that possible, or did you mean to say that this is how you feel and were just too preoccupied wih others to get to the heart of the matter?

 

I think that is what makes this a wonderful write. It exposes how the writer is thinking in a vague displaced way. Yes, we all do that, don't we?

 

-peace-

 

.....


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

sweetwater's picture

Could you squeeze out a

Could you squeeze out a little more, even a slightly longer sentance. I think I understand the meaning but I would like to know a little more. :-) X

SH95's picture

Damned to their smell, their

Damned to their smell, their voice, their touch

As they control the lovers every move

The lover a willing victim. 

 

... x

sweetwater's picture

Ahh Thank you, of course..I

Ahh Thank you, of course..I get it now. very clever.  :-) X