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SOMEONE LIKE YOU
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OLDIE MOLDIE
I dream that someday
someone special would come my way
I found out it had come true
when you talked to me that day
your voice, yes I remember
affectionate, sweet and caring
that's all you are
how often do I imagine you?
everyday, thinking if your love is true.
I hope we'll share idyllic times
laughing, carefree with so much fun
I'll rest my head on your shoulder
as you hold my hand
and together we'll talk
how wonderful life has become
we'll watch that rainbow painting the sky
its radiance carries the hope
even when rains doth come
yes, I'll be like that
I promise you
a burst of colors
when your life is blue.
very sweet
"I promise you a burst of colors when yours is blue"
sounds like you put some thought into this line. makes people smile!! he must be a lucky guy. i once dated a poet. have to admit i miss the poems rolling in, he used to write me...
I loved this line we'll watch that rainbow painting the sky also the very last line in this poem was good too..
There is something real and powerful about this poem, Serene! Indeed, our dreams make us human. But our yearnings make us humane. Dreams and longings are real for me; but all I see in this beautifully woven piece: "SOMEONE LIKE YOU" is reality. It feels so wonderful and unfathomable to love and be loved in return. Unreciprocated love can be painful and unfulfillingly devastating. What Serene has enchantingly done in this luring poem is to draw us into those realms of beauty, love and inspiration where the rainbow uplifts us to the level of joy and humaneness with all of its radiant colours. And surely, the rainbow drives me wild. My love for the rainbow can only be explained by the concept of forever friendship. The following lines captures the truth and reality of Serene's joyful love: "how wonderful life has become we'll watch that rainbow painting the sky its radiance carries the hope..." Let us then learn that life, inspite of all the pain that surrounds us, can afterall be beautiful and hopeful with gladness. May we learn from Serene's real yearnings and radiant rainbow - let our love for one another outlive the monuments of stone - just like the hopeful rainbow in the blue sky. Thank you so much, Serene for letting us have "SOMEONE LIKE YOU"! Ugonna Wachuku