Intimacy (In This Moment)

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To My Wife

Lost in this moment

The warmth of our bodies make us sweat

The stiffness from what we have just accomplished

You and I,

A miracle

Your breath invites me in

Into your heart

Into your mind

Into your very soul

As our bodies mesh into one

As our souls embrace each other

You sigh as I touch you

Ectasy as we unite

Swirlling vortex of pleasure

Both of us lose sight

As life is created within you

As death is passed on through me

A miracle is created

A mirror of that moment

When we came together as one

Sassylass's picture

beautiful

dedication love poem!

 

CKK


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words

 

Starward's picture

Revisiting this, the

Revisiting this, the experience is just as fresh, just as profound


Starward

Seraphim's picture

I'm Glad

That you still enjoy it. Words live outside of time, 

and thereby do not age as we do; they are immortal.

Thank you for revisiting. 


Post Tenebras Spero Lucem

Starward's picture

This is one of the most

This is one of the most profound love poems I have ever read, especially the lines

As life is created within you

As death is passed on through me

 

I have been reading poetry for forty three years now, and I have found very few love poems with this kind of spiritual depth.


Starward

Seraphim's picture

Gratitude

Thank you. I appreciate your feedback. Your poems are very spiritually in-depth as well, although for myself I find that the style of my writing undulates with my own spiritual "highs" and "lows," peaks and troughs as C.S. Lewis wrote in the Screwtape Letters. Thank you for your time!


Post Tenebras Spero Lucem

Starward's picture

Revisiting again, and I think

Revisiting again, and I think the poem is even more beautiful than on my first reading.


Starward