Here Comes The Rain

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You made my day as black as night
My life feels loss of meaning.
You’ve turned dark what once was bright
How can you know what I’m feeling?

Did you know that once you filled my life
Your loss would be unreal?
I could’ve avoided the pain and strife
If you had told me how you feel.

 

Here comes the rain
I’m crying in pain
Sighing with the wind
Swaying in the trees
Here comes the rain
I’m carrying the pain
I’m falling to my knees-
Here comes the rain.

 

Why did you say that I am not enough?
Why pierce me to the soul?
Because now, like the winter wind outside
My heart’s become so cold.

Here comes the rain
I’m crying in pain
Sighing with the wind
Swaying in the trees
Here comes the rain
I’m carrying the pain
I’m falling to my knees-
Here comes the rain.

 

Here comes the rain
I’m crying in pain
Sighing with the wind
Swaying in the trees
Here comes the rain
I’m carrying the pain
I’m falling to my knees-
Here comes the rain.

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SSmoothie's picture

A STRONG AND WELL WRITTEN PIECE!

A really revealing and insightful poem, great work! Cheers SS


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Envy's picture

wow

cassiebee's picture

honestly..... this brought

honestly..... this brought tears to my eyes. this is beautiful!!! have you ever played it? if not, you DEFINITELY should!! i really like the flow of it and the picture it paints in my mind. whoever let you go, made a wrong choice.


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