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Painfully sublime

How stupid I must look to a well read eye.

My humility flows in like gentle breeze.

Let me wallow in your laughters birth.

Funny and fresh; just like baby's breath.

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Release me pride and keep me humble for in this life I may stumble My hands are wide I can't carry the world It's out of me hands but not out of me sight I have to be vigilant I have be right

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©18 December 2014 - 2:37am — schmuckjones
22 December 2014 - 1:53am — SSmoothie
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Now I love the way this peice

Now I love the way this peice weaves in and out of reality and thought! great little write! cheers SS

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

22 December 2014 - 1:57pm — schmuckjones
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Thanks SS!

Yeah, I was thinking about what its like to make a mistake or to trip and fall.  You know, when the world is laughing at you for your mistake, but being able to accept your humility and being able to find joy in those laughing at you.  

13 January 2015 - 1:45pm — allets
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Definition of Stupid

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wordsmith - Voila! ~( :D)- Lady A
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14 January 2015 - 2:14pm — schmuckjones
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I was quite short-sighted when I first read this comment

Hey! Why's she calling me stupid?.....  Oooooo wait a second, she's not.  *smacks head*  Wow I really am dumb sometimes.  Thanks for that gigantic word Stella, much obliged as always.