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Fireflies
I can make you as weak as water -
At the same time awesomely strong.
Fireflies of desire dance with green fire
Burning away caution and pride-
Bur I do not want your future hate
For the sake of present love.
I know you are honorable, strong-willed -
And so this burning madness would bring
Self-destruction.
Silent and intense, I turn and walk away,
Suffering.
Magic ebbs . Weariness envelopes.
My heart is suddenly cold and old.
What I want to know is if you refers to the reader or is there some more deeper, more intruiging meaning to "you" I really liked it! Good Job!
PS- did you know Hotaru is japanese for firefly. lol, i thought you should know that
Fireflies
My answer to you is, yes.
Thank you for the japanese word, hotaru. I love to know what are to me, new words. Thank you for your comment.
AWESOME WORK
Fireflies
Thank you for reading, and commenting. Super.