L

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Enduring

He was walking down

the street

after the end

of his engagement..

when the capital

L of a street

sign fell near him..

underlining his

falling Love.

As he watched

the manager

come out with

a ladder, hammer

and nails..

and affix the

L once again..

he thought

perhaps

he too

would try again.

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Gloria Lopez's picture

I really like this poem. I beleive that things happen for a reason and in your poem that's what happened God gave him a sign. Follow your heart. Pay attention to all signs they will help you later in life. Keep it up Your a really good poet.

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Meg M. Marquardt's picture

I'm not sure what it is about this poem, but it is really great. It's simple, and in its simplicity, it is deep.