I have loved to the point of madness*

Folder: 
2014

 

Maybe it was the air today

Or the words we chose

Or the lack of a solid breakfast

It was just….

Off

Like teeth slowly aging over time

Thin filmy coatings leaving yellow stains on our chemistry

We’re smoking

You and I

Taking tiny hits of nicotine and calling them friendship

But its not

Its just cigarettes

Smoke and mirrors

 

Leaving tiny yellow stains on nicotine conversations

Author's Notes/Comments: 

*Francois Sagon

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Beavis's picture

You are a master at capturing

You are a master at capturing a moment in a relationship, freezing it, letting us examine it; always so personal, yet universal that my own memories often intertwine. Simply excellent Dear!

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:)

thank you my dear! its good to have you reading again :)


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Ashley

Fitzgerald's picture

my goodness! this is great 

my goodness! this is great 

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:)

shucks

thanks love


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Ashley

bishu's picture

Thank you Respected RWR for introducing FS ":)


©bishu 

 

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:)

its a good quote no? 


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Ashley

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Undoubtedly a wonderful quote Respected RWR !!!!!

Undoubtedly a wonderful quote Respected RWR !!!!!


©bishu 

 

SSmoothie's picture

great stuff that lovely

great stuff that lovely madness! GREAT WRITE! HUGSS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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shucks :)

thank you my dear :) sometimes...I just feel more like a writer than a person...you know?


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Ashley

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Oh I know babe. I know for

Oh I know babe. I know for sure. hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

Beatnik1979's picture

Excellent poem

This was executed brilliantly. A great poet uses words to create an arrangement, an excellent poet carefully selects those words to create a vivid image. You are ( by far) the latter. I particularly enjoyed the wording of line 7. Well done! 

 

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:) *blushing*

thank you, I don't know what to say to that other than thank you :)


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Ashley