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The window sun is warm

Like summer in my veins

I am open at this table

With the world around for the viewing

I am open

Willing

Looking for your love

Warm as the window sun

Wondering how long I must feel your absence

Before you are summer in my veins again

 

 

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©14 February 2013 - 4:15am — running_with_rabbits
14 February 2013 - 7:25am — Beavis
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Absolutely hearstopping! I love this! For me, this is perfection of a short poem. Not only is it beautilly writtin and lyrical, but there is an entire implied (for each reader) short story within. Powerful and fabulous Dear!

15 February 2013 - 12:56pm — running_with_rabbits
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:) Beavis you are too goos to

:) Beavis you are too goos to me :) glad you liked it love

Much Love

Ashley

16 February 2013 - 4:51am — allets
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So

,,,I'm back in Port Huron at 1610 Riverview, sitting at the fold top table, feeling the sun hit my face from the dining room window, thinking of dust motes in sun beams. This is one of my strongest feeling from my youth, and you brought it back. Transported, I am, yours in writing, Stella

 

 

22 February 2013 - 9:03pm — running_with_rabbits
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:) HUGS I am honored and

:) HUGS I am honored and blushing very deeply :)

Much Love

Ashley