Sometimes I treat my writing as a place to vent

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When things happen
I think
And I think
And I think
And then I think some more.
I think out all angles of a situation, all possible explanations, scenarios, and outcomes.
I just think.
But then I have all these thoughts.
Just there in my head popping like popcorn in my brain.
And I get full.
I stop remembering what thoughts I thought were the truth; what ones I believe
And what thoughts were just devils advocates or other people’s inputs.

So I write
And I write
And I write
And then I write some more.
And I get it all out,
Let the pen eat the pop corn, let the paper soak the butter.
And then it's clear.
The words on the page are hardly the words of truth.
Just bits of moments considered and tossed aside.

The anger is not real
It was a moment in over thought passed by like lambs blood on a door.

You were angry,
I was angry,
The poem was angry,
For the writer it has passed,
But for the reader it is all that there is

Author's Notes/Comments: 

refined from a conversation with rhythmofconection

thanks my dear :)

PERSPECTIVE... lol

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ashes_theartofburning's picture

Beautiful!

This is my favorite so far!

It was a moment in over thought passed by like lambs blood on a door.

Pure genius.

Keep 'em coming!
=^.^=


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

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:) I am blushing

:) I am blushing


Much Love

Ashley

SSmoothie's picture

this statement is pure art!

this statement is pure art! ;) love the way you write!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

running_with_rabbits's picture

:) thanks smoothie! I

:) thanks smoothie! I recently discovered some amazing beat box poets and wrote something very unlike me, and not sure if I wanna post it or not as it is sooooo not like me, it is wordy REALLY wordy


Much Love

Ashley

Moonshadow's picture

lol! I always post things that are soooooo unlike me

till they become like me! lol! no pain, no gain!!! ") growth is GOOOD!!!


Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow

SSmoothie's picture

Hey! I like your style Moon shadow!

Cant wait to see you write!!! AsH!!! yeah I totally agree with what moon shadow said!!! :D


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Perhaps soon

Thanks SSmoothie :)


Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow

running_with_rabbits's picture

lol so true! I need to edit

lol so true!
I need to edit the typos first I wrote it in the dark at like 3am by the dim light of my laptop so it's so bad! at one point I think the word did turned into bid lol


Much Love

Ashley