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BEFORE I DROWN

My heart is underwater,

And I am drowning in your sea

And my head is lost somewhere

In between

My hope for my future,

And my wildest dreams,

And my deepest,darkest secrets,

And my fantasies.



And I am travelling in circles,

And spinning around,

And just can't seem to keep my feet

Planted firmly on the ground.

And my head is soaring

Way above the clouds.

Get me out of this deep water

Before I drown.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Getting so lost in someone that you forget who you are.

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©19 December 2001 - 11:06pm — rosebudblooming
11 August 2004 - 2:33am — Laura Maguire (not verified)
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Very catchy.

10 January 2004 - 9:57pm — poetvg
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lovely :*P
u used aloto
of emotions
on this one .

20 December 2001 - 11:06pm — Beverley McInnis (not verified)
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Well written. Emotions tangled, losing oneself, the need for a life jacket to stay afloat...lots of emotions here.