the safest bet Pt1

they were together in the end

it was the safest bet

 

the sun was setting on the autumn eve on the tubes that make him breath

 

he looked at her she looked at him

to see what he would say

 

to hear his final dyeing words before he slipped away

 

I always hated you said he

I always knew said she

 

I hate you to she said

by then he was dead

 

By then the sun had set

it was the safest bet. 

 

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The Safest Bet Pt1

Wow! - Lady A
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I often wonder

And hope those are not my last words.

I hope I break free from his misery before it goes that far.

 

I love the way you write. 

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The sound carries the reader, the content is stunning and awe worthy - Lady A
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