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Come write with me
Let's tell a story oh so sweet
We've written rhythm
And the regrets that we all keep
Now let's write another
For the poetic world to see
My friends in chryme I ask now
Come Write a song with me


"When Love is a Rhyme"
Is what it will be named
So come and tell me stories
Of how love can chase the rain
What is it in your heart of hearts
That call you each to say
That love is in the feeling
And rhyme is on its way


It has been far too long since I've been here. And far too long since we've written together. So I say, that we write another. Let us bring this poetic world together. What say you? Shall we collaborate?

ALL SUBMISSIONS ARE IN. NOW THE FUN BEGINS.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

An invitation for all who feel the desire to come write a new collaboration with me
For inspiration, here's the previous collaborations
http://www.postpoems.org/authors/roc/poem/938458
http://www.postpoems.org/authors/roc/poem/944536


Post your submissions as comments here. And I will put them together, once more

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djtj's picture

Love on Rhyme

Love on Rhyme like  the drug it is  

I hate the word rhyme and rythmn

cuz I never can't spell them

Like breathe and breath

Which one is it?

 

Liked all your assemblies

 

RoC's picture

I am Rhythm

Roc stands for Rhythm of Contention, after all. :)


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

Sassylass's picture

rant

Gone


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words

 

RoC's picture

How about

"If Love Was A Rhyme"


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

SSmoothie's picture

Oooh yeah i really like that

Oooh yeah i really like that Roc. Legend as alwaySS! !!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

RoC's picture

Bred from your very inkwell, of course

But it's not working in my head so, here goes the new official title
"When Love Is A Rhyme"


When love is a rhyme
The heartstrings chime
Longing and aching to be on the line
A verse as divine
As heartbeats in time
This is the meaning of the story of life
And this is the feeling when love is a rhyme


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

KindredSpirit's picture

I just want to say

RoC is very very Good.

Great opening.

You really have called up

The Stars.

KS

RoC's picture

Thank you sir

I do like to scream up to the skies


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

Diamond_Wills_New_War's picture

Is there a theme or subject

Is there a theme or subject you want us to try and write on?


Long days and pleasant nights

Diamond

RoC's picture

Love

As you see it or feel it


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

Diamond_Wills_New_War's picture

I'm not very good with rhyme, and my lines aren't all too happy.

For all its virtues, values, and qualities
It reminds most of my inequalities
That which strengthens others so much
Weakens me ever evading my touch
Now I fear it, revere it, pine for it
Past a measure I'm willing to admit
It's brought loneliness hard to contain
One the makes most moments to be feign
I don't know what's keeping me hopeful
When all my love's ever been was woeful
But still I'll seek love's true proposal


Like I said I'm horrid with rhyme but figure I'd try, don't know if this will be of any use to you but do with it what you will.


Long days and pleasant nights

Diamond

RoC's picture

It's about what love is to yoy

My friend. And I say that's good enough as is. I can definitely make it work.
Love isn't all sunshine and rainbows anyway. It's work. It pulls out the best and worst in us. It's both weakness and strength. And for nothing more than a 4 letter words. It makes us both vulnerable and invincible. So if lover to you is dark, then you get the reclaim the power section. I trust you'll not be disappointed with how you fit in. Perhaps a bit of that old Roland Wayne is in order for a followup


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

KindredSpirit's picture

I will put something out

You can use.

If you want.

It is the downer side

Of Love.

KS

RoC's picture

I'm sure

I can work it in.


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

RoC's picture

Perhaps

A bit of inspiration


Love me like the thunder
Set fire in my eyes
Tear me all asunder
As we look upon forever's guise
Touch like you'll never
Let the feelings here subside
Chase with me, this endeavor
Take me to your paradise


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

Morningglory's picture

Sounds like a great idea to

Sounds like a great idea to me. Course, I wanna follow the other writers. Need the spark lit under.... 


Copyright © morningglory

Sassylass's picture

Ahhhh

Lead it!

its gotta get good


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words

 

Sassylass's picture

Begin it

Start it going. I like to follow....

c'mon poets!

thank you,it's a total pleasure

Koko~


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words

 

allets's picture

Found you

Let's Rock! 

 

.

Stand here beside me

and watch the sunrise

from my balcony.

Somebody, anybody

else's view is lovely,

so long as you

stand next to me.

.

The air is crisp

but the night is gone,

and here is where

we will always

be, in the sunrise

with you standing next

to me.

.

Light drinks the shadows

and halos your silouette

in morning's promise 

of another day. Come

see what together 

we can see, because i

can not imagine

any tomorrow without 

you next to me.

.

Stella Crews

Use whatever piece of this poem you like.

.


 

~Lady A ~



Onyamaichi

 

RoC's picture

How's this sound? For starters

Stand here beside me watch the sun
The air is crisp, the night is done


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

allets's picture

FOR THE LOVE IN RHYME

To reflect the purpose of the instructions. . 



Onyamaichi

 

tallsquirrelgirl's picture

An addition

We tumble onward and shake memories

out of the sunlight and the autumn breeze

Catch a star, pretend it’s cacophony

And as the world sinks to this sunset

I fall at your feet


*tallsquirrelgirl* she feels in italics and thinks in CAPITALS ~henry james

RoC's picture

Incredible

From a cacophony of star fall to a fall into a lover's dream. I can definitely fit that in. Glad you could join the fray.


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

Sassylass's picture

Line..word...verse

light drinks the shadows and halos your silouette

melancholy tears and past years to forget


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words

 

RoC's picture

That

Is just simply beautiful. The imagery, the sensitivity. I do believe I can find a way to impress all of this upon the final piece


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

Sassylass's picture

C mon

where do we write it together?

two lines down

stellas  line 1

then Cheryl (Koko) line 2

 


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words

 

RoC's picture

Everyone posts what they want included

And assemble it all together
http://www.postpoems.org/authors/roc/poem/940506


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

Sassylass's picture

I'm frickin lost

already as to what  , where,how....

And frustrations aren't a good thing.

theres no instructions to know for me, a newbie in a mass write.

Roc you had best mentor me in this

i took it from Allets ,added a line.

now  I see more  written as a stanza,beautiful as it is

and confusion burst in.

who puts what together ?

i can't seem to get this

HELP!

ive written collars with one at a time before.

this is new.

Koko~

 


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words

 

Sassylass's picture

I finally

Got it.

Well duh!


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words

 

RoC's picture

Sent you a PM

With the deets


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

Sassylass's picture

Thanks

:)


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words

 

allets's picture

I Read COME WRITE WITH ME

but I was in love a few dozen times and registered it as COME SING WITH ME.  Hmmmm...

~ A ~

EUREKA!!! It is in RoC's poem. "Come write a song with me". Definitely in the top 10 invitations I got this year!

 

 

 



Onyamaichi

 

Sassylass's picture

My add in

Is on the other end

 


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words