For the girl I love

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Romance

Never before had I beheld
Such a beauty unparalleled
While others stop to stare

I can only hope to share

 

With a mind like no other

Though not made to smother

A kinder smile I have not seen

It makes me happier than I've ever been

 

For Her I would give the world

To see her love for me unfurl

For in those eyes of blueish-green

I find a hope that is rarely seen

 

She lights a fire within my soul

Within of which she has healed all holes

Though she is not mine to keep

The price of losing her is far too steep

 

With beauty unmatched by any art to this day

She holds my mind with a certain sway

But she has found a love oh so sweet

Such of which I could never hope to beat

 

~R 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is my first ever poem I've ever written
Any advice/tips would be appreciated :) 

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palewingedpoetess's picture

Exceptional..............you should be so proud.

I mean that truly. I can't say enough for this. I also want to say I love your use of within of which. That really caught my eye. You are the poetic bomb baby.Run with this monster talent run and don't look back. Sincerely, Melissa Lundeen.

P.S. Oh and welcome to pp as well. It's a pretty great place to share.

Morningglory's picture

First ever!? Nice job. Keep

First ever!? Nice job. Keep going...........


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