a constellatory chorus

 

A Constellatory Chorus


The Astronomer  

I do not name stars—I record desire.

What you call Orion, I call recurrence.

Each pattern you trace is a gesture retold:

someone, somewhere, lifting a hand in longing.

 

The Architect  

My blueprint hums with stellar grammar.

Windows echo nebulae, stairwells spin like spirals.

I do not build rooms; I invite orbit.

Every threshold is a doorway to gravity.

 

The Beloved 

When I wore your breath like a scarf,

the sky folded around us.

I didn’t say I loved you.

I just let the moon finish my sentence.

 

The Child 

I climbed a ladder once,

held a saucepan skyward,

and caught a piece of night

still warm from someone’s wish.

 

The Dying One 

This body folds inward, yes—

but what spills out is filigree and firelight.

Call it soul, call it after-image—

it still wants to become sky.

 

The River 

Your reflection is not yours alone.

It swims with galaxies, bonefish and stardust.

Even stillness ripples when someone looks with meaning.

 

The Voice Inside the Sky 

You’ve always been here.

Every breath you released arranged itself into constellations.

You made me long before I learned your name.

 

 

 

 

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Author's Notes/Comments: 

...to follow and hopefully culminate  'constellatory' and 'constellatory 2'

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patriciajj's picture

Each member of the cosmic

Each member of the cosmic chorus, unique and yet one, sang with the expansive perspective, thundering realness and personal passion of themselves as well as the Source of all Creation. 

 

Each voice was more mind-bending and gripping than the next and you culminated the symphony with an ethereal Love that cut deep . . . astonished me with raw Truth. The emotional aftermath was almost too beautiful to bear. 

 

Bravo, maestro! 

 
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Thank you dear Patricia. I am

Thank you dear Patricia. I am most appreciative of these words, these thoughts that adorn the poetic process.


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Rather than gush about

Rather than gush about the ABSOLUTE AND EXQUISITE VERBAL BEAUTY of this poem, I wll say, rather, this, which I am also going to leave as instructions to my family:  if I am lucidly conscious at the hour of my death, I want this poem to be read to me as I get ready to soar out.  If that cannot be done, I would like to have it read at my funeral . . . if you will give me permission in advance for that.


Starward-Led [in Chrismation, Januarius]

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Of course, dear StarSpared;

Of course, dear StarSpared; who am I to deny such instructions. Let the poem do its work, the poet's work has already been done. 


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