to her

I know you like books/but fuck the coma sutra/50 shades of grey?/the whole rainbow otta suit ya/Cause I'll bring the color/to this black and white movie/Been called captain save a hoe/makes sense/how/wonder woman's wooed me/

Lie next to me/cape off/lasso me with yo/whip/Sure you could call it a leash/but that doesn't mean that I'm whipped/Cause I'd be chained to you any day/can't think of a better way/To spend a day/off/at noon a sloth/cause all night Im awake/

Lovein you/Huggin you/doing what couples do/A bomb shell/mixed/with/a troubled youth/The long haul/or not/I swear that I'm here for you/Cause you gave me your heart/and I'm determined to see it through/

V2:

My lines be chosen carefully/I can see how you care for me/If I couldn't/you'd breathe for me/inconceivably needing thee/Love that you give/the touch that you bear/Aware/that when your gone/I don't know how ill fair/

But I know this/you took a hold this/ hopeless/Half homeless/borderline/broke bitch/Flipped a switch/like/some kind of remote/miss/You got a gift/girl you should have your own bravo show/with/

Housewives/and cow vines/Andy Cohen tag lines/Bout' time/someone payed mind/To this nine/Plus one/add it up/shit/now you're a ten/And one more zero/cause I'll always give you 100%/

Babe I hope I made a dent/In the ice you say encases/Your heart/cause my intentions to try and replace it/And face it/with all your sass/we know is a front/What you needs good sex/good food/and a blunt/

That I got by the plenty/wishin our time together won't end/Please don't get testy/when I say if you go/so does my best friend/

V3:

You keep the faith/you see what I fail too/In myself/like you are too me/no veil too/Hide who you are/wether it's the flesh/or what's under/Allowing me to see all of your strengths/and glimpses of your blunders/

Your a stunner/lying with a bum you're/Amazing/always be more than a lover/Helping me to realize/that my real life/does mean something/Didn't want Cupid to shoot me/looks like he got me while runnin/

Away/but babe/with you I wanna stay/Today/yesterday/all night/I want us to lay/Together in your bed/were only I'm aloud/Tonight'll be noisy/but it won't be my snoring thats loud/

Haha wow/I profess this/from the deepest of my chest/You know I'ma hot mess/who'll he share his life with/Take a guess/sheets amess/as we lie unwound/If it were you or the world/guess it just the two of us now/

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Imprinted-soul's picture

This is great. Exciting,

This is great. Exciting, funny and beautiful.

But all so real. I enjoyed this..

readmy5tuff's picture

its all just structure and

its all just structure and knowing you and her. research styles of writing. mine is lyrical and are usually written for a song. someone once said, in so many words,that when you have to in   certain boindries the pressure of having to do so leaves you with diamonds

DesertDreamer's picture

This is.... amazing. If I

This is.... amazing. If I could write something even half as good as this for my girlfriend I would be happy! But alas. I cannot write about my lover or for my lover. It just never works.


~~We can fade away together one dream at a time.~~

readmy5tuff's picture

was something writtwn for my

was something writtwn for my girlfriend, which makes me feel dumb for posting it, for a few reasons. will fix the structure when im home. damn smart phone doesnt wanna cooperate

allets's picture

Structure is Structure is Structuue

Late to the poetry reading again, I'm glad you posted this one. It's what lover's want to hear and seldom get composed for them. Who is Cupid? I think you could sell these lyrics for big bucks. - Just Bein Stella