mind to foggy to be feelin froggy


 

I'm trying to find/a moment of clarity/

Past all theses sub/stan/ces/impairing me/

I've got a flipping temper/like I'm switching polarity/

Man I'm broker than hell/havin' no future is scarin' me/

Some clarity/some fog lights/for for my path/

a map for the future/an eraser/for the past/

Some clarity/as I a dash for first/evading last/

Poverty is drowning me/for air I gasp/

For some clarity/as i/dash for the surface/

Of my self doubts/do I do this on purpose?/

I'm feelin worthless/happiness/do I deserve it?/

That's a yes if I can love myself/and find my worth its/

Poss/ible/to look beyond the bull/

Pass/ible/is all your your life's trouble/

Love yourself/BITCH/not the one that you cuddle/ 

Now that's some clarity for ya/no duh/yo/

I'm trying to spit/like yoda bro/

Trying to look inside get phil/osoph/ical/

Clarify my issues/repair the holes/

So I can come back stronger/by a million fold/

I'm like a/super saiyan/on the brink of destruction

/I get stronger the more I'm beatin/this track is fucked then/

As it riddles me with notes/my powers releasin'/

To blast it back three/years/a/go/last weekend/

Some clarity/has seeped in/to my inner cerebrum/

These self doubts/I think/ima/leave em

/Other people fuck em/no need to please em/

 ill find the clarity to improve/by this time/next season/

Ahhhhh/fuck it/love the day/and what may be/

Who knows what is next/life's got no skip a scene/

I'm switchback sippin'/as I roll up some green/

ill Just thinkin on it all/and what it means/

Author's Notes/Comments: 

inspired by jay-z's moment of clarity

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running_with_rabbits's picture

wow it has been a long time!

I can't even remember the last time I was on your page but am I ever glad I did!

this flows really well! it would be killer to hear it beat boxed! we really need to get our slam poetry up and going on this site!


Much Love

Ashley

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Rap City Rapsody

The flow was mellow - the content pesonal and applicable to all of us - fuck people - the ultimate let me figure out me first line. The truth in not depending on the beloved or lovers, depend onself first - yes! - Each line pulls the reader into the next, this should be spit out/nobody gets to sit out. - "...life's got no skip a scene..." is a blow out line. Too many other fabulous lines in here to list. A total success. A mind shattering message with matching co-themes. Enjoyed and felt the didacticsm. ~Lady A~


 

 

readmy5tuff's picture

glad you enjoyed it i always

glad you enjoyed it i always look forward to your comments allets!!! it has a beat to it maybe ill post it like that