don't wanna say goodbye: inspired by sugarr

Goodbye is a word i never want to speak
to never utter from in between my cheeks
nor under my breath, nor the hole above my chin
do i ever want to say goodbye again
ive said goodbye once, but it was not by choice
goodbye to the man who bore my seed, he lost the air to his voice
lying on a metal slab, draped in a sheet, mind in a void
he was alone for he was not visited by his little boy
i said goodbye again, to a girl i thought my hearts equal
on the outside she seemed good, on the in she was evil
like an m&m with a hidden nut to allergic people
i didnt know until i bit in that i'd need an epinepherin needle
so many times a day do i say goodbye
but to what degree is determined by whos hearing the line
but i have noticeed upon that word its also hard to try
to just walk up to someone new and just say...hi

Author's Notes/Comments: 

inspired by sugarr "its hard to say goodbye":http://www.postpoems.org/authors/sugarr/poem/940469

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tongonmg's picture

I think nobody in this world

I think nobody in this world will want to say goodbye and not he want that other use this word for him,its very hard to hear and then to control ourselves,the following link provides you some fine quotes that tells the bet things about Goodbye.

http://www.qoutz.com/goodbye-quotes

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I am in love with this poem!!

I am in love with this poem!! Its amazing!! It would mean a lot if you went and checked out one of my poems!!


A heart is like a puzzle. It's hard to put together when the pieces are broken and missing.
RedAsBlood :)

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glad you liked it. if you

glad you liked it. if you want you should check out its ssugars its awesometasticalyamazisupacool!!!!!

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thanks roc that means a lot

thanks roc that means a lot im glad you liked it

RoC's picture

Now that

is awesome

"on the in she is evil
like an m&m with a hidden nut to allergic people
i didn't know until I bit in that i'd need an epenepherin needle"

That right there is just priceless brilliant.


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