love potion fish tank

im so sick of these bitches hurting me
maybe i should just get open heart surgery
that way you can skip through the bone and tissue
and kill me quickly so i dont have to miss you
or any of these other hopeless tricks
fucking with my head, slight of hand, my heart slips
out of my chest into their wretched clutches
their hands squeezing my heart, why'd i even let them touch it?
you see i get worked up over stupid crushes
then i get crushed, love drunk im a lush its
ridiculous how i think other people share what i feel
i show compassion but noone reciprocates this ordeal
i feel like i will be alone as i wish
to find that one, fuck all the other fish
but you see im just a hermit afraid of the ocean
im trapped in my fish tank swimming in love potion

Author's Notes/Comments: 

sick of getting walked on by women, used to think em godesses, now theyre more like devils

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katinthecradle's picture

That ending was perfect. I

That ending was perfect. I mean, the writing. Not the fact you keep getting screwed over. Lol 


catwoman

readmy5tuff's picture

the only fish i can get come

the only fish i can get come with chips and are battered
the ones in the "sea," soon as i step in they seem to scatter
im no predator, no great white, fish are friends not food
im still trying to find my nemo by the search aint going so good
im starting to think its me me, myself, and i
alone, for noone is swimming by my side
but you know what they're missing out fuck em let em scatter
if they don't want to bite my bait they can go get battered( NOT ABUSED:)

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that was deep and i get what

that was deep and i get what your saying i have a tendency to do that. i will definately try and heed your advice

RoC's picture

Ever been fishing?

Notice you gotta keep throwing the bait-thieving guppies back to catch the big ones?

Kinda the reason for "there's plenty of fish in the sea"
Because some will bite, and some will sting
Some are poison if handled carelessly
Then there's the ones the swim in their own stream
Far away from the rules of the other fishies
Those, my friend, are the hardest to find
But when you catch one, you'll know that you're alive
And when you're out there fishing in that open sea
You bait a hook and wait patiently
But the best catch is rarely the first, you see
That's why you keeping fishing

Don't write them all off, just one at a time as necessary. Some women are way too good to be ignored, but if you build your idea of them around the ones you've wasted time with, then you might just miss out one something incredible. Be wary, and stay the course, my friend. There are women out there waiting to make a king out of you.


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

Lovethatred's picture

You write about the women who

You write about the women who crush your heart, we ladies write of you men. Then it is a toss up with other matters we all contend with on a regular basis. Sometimes we have to pick a lot of lemons in the orchard of love before we find that grand prize apple, peach, pear....otherwise that perfect one.


Susan Bressman

readmy5tuff's picture

very well said. i dont want

very well said. i dont want to have to dig to the bottom of the basket to find that right one. i just wish it was simpler

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appreciate it!! and you got

appreciate it!! and you got my word on not stopping spitting words

ashes_theartofburning's picture

>.<

Stupid fish.

You know their nothing but stinky twats.

Xp

What me?

"Oh, No.
Dear Sir, I am of a nebulae.
Scattered particles.
I create these burning luminescent punctures within the sky.
Just look up at the vast numbers of shining "choices""

Become an astronaut.

Weird.
I just posted a comment similar to this.

Everything works itself out in the end.
Don't stop spittin' those sick lyrics though.

^.^


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

SSmoothie's picture

Ha ha! I used to say the same

Ha ha! I used to say the same about boys! The trick is not to go for passion, and one that makes you feel too crazy inside has more influence over you, keep it in your cool zone. Fascination quickly fades and is obsessive, the right kind of love will find you, you just got to relax and get more involved in other things and perhaps a shy little fish just dying to meet you might get a chance to get comfortable by the edge of your tank and won't rush away, if you slowly move towards her... Just saying, don't let your emotions Rule you totally, ;) love will come in many forms, fleeting and stable, unconsummated and consummated, don't rush wait for the right one so many others including myself didn't. Life is for loving loving is for living! HugSS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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thanks ssmoothie the advice

thanks ssmoothie the advice really helps. i think it just sucks though i dont wanna be lonely cause it sucks, but i get close and i get hurt