A Gothic Romance

Sitting in isolation
Completely dressed in black
Skin Pale as the snow
Heart beats through my chest
Piercing through her lip
Black lining round her eyes
Even the tears were black
That resulted from her cries
Razors around her belt
Corsette around her chest
In a world of Abercrombe
I dream of her instead
I watch her from a far
Completely mezmerized
She turns in my direction
We're staring eye to eye
Gorgeous little goth girl
You leave me in a trance
Please let me partake
In this most gothic of romance

I can see him watching
With his hair over an eye
IT feels like love at first site
The heart would never lie
Black from head to foot
Piercings through his ears
Eyes outlined by darkness
I'm overtaken by my fear
This precious little goth boy
His hair is dark and black
My every single desire
Not one does he even lack
He shyly stands there watching
And I stay in my place
I turn in his direction
Face Turned to face

The goth boy keeps on staring
The girl gets to her feet
They soon walk towards eachother
Only seperated by 2 feet
Now stand face to face
Neither spoke a word
An overwelming silence
Loneliness has been cured
Eye looks into eye
Hand soon meets with hand
Fingers intertwine
The girl has found her man

Hand in hand they walk
Thanks to this special dance
Homecomming has produced
A new Gothic Romance

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J9thxciv's picture

Excellent!

Excellent!


J9thxciv, fka Starward

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Juliet8's picture

This one's my favorite of yours.


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Travis Scott's picture

I really liked this poem. Actually, I don't believe I've read a poem of yours I didn't like. You seem to be a very accomplished writer. If you don't mind I would appreciate it if you would take a look at my works and give me some advice.

Dracona_Dragonfly's picture

all i can say to this one is that i was talking to my fioncee on the phone when i read it, i got chills up my spine and i had to get him to read it. i love this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Asheron's picture

This one I liked alot.


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Monica Frances's picture

ok...aaa.if u wrote this.....u did a good job...i love it .... living in goth world.... :))