Sunset (an acrostic poem)

Sol seals the sky with a flame-blushed kiss.

Unto his lady fair, he leaves...his scent.

Nyx draws closer... intoxicated by his fire.

She... slides on her gown of star-strewn velvet

entering his smouldering dream.

There they will one.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

an acrostic poem, metaphor for Day (Sol) and Night (Nyx)

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Dizzylemons's picture

This was great, I haven't read an acrostic for a while now. This poem is really sensual, the pauses add to the feeling perfectly and words like smoudlering and flame-blushed heighten the feeling even more. Keep it up ^^