worth her heaven

I burped up some shit,

And bragged,

Not out of my ass.

I was left with selective views,

And chose to keep up the walls;

Deciding I had sight.

I stuck my hands in the pants of a blind man,

He warned me,

He could still feel.

Damn, beneath me in two senses.

No, he retorted,

I still listen to all that you closed your eyes to.

He cant hear my response

As he walks away with his calmed happiness.

Because who can be happy

Without someone who wants them to be happy;

Or worse yet,

Has to live with someone who loves him.

Hers reading this overlook the homoeroticism.

Maybe a dick could overlook it

For the softness of pussy.

Pussy, which drives to bigger cities,

And smaller economies.

Who sprinkles on whispered-over water,

But fears everything else

In what should be her kingdom.

Who articulates forgiveness and sin.

Who lives her life

Not quite sure,

Which is godly,

Which should be forgiven,

And which is worth her heaven.

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